Acqua di Disperazione

This one really draws my attention. You've chosen an interesting reference photo, drawn it realistically but in your own way which I really like. I think you used a good contrast and you've got an eye for composition. I find this work extraordinary because it's not a kind of portrait we're used to, not only because of the angle of her face but also because there are some things that highlight her personality like these freckles. I love the expression you captured very well it seems you can't read in her face like in an open book, you're not quite sure what she's really thinking. I like how you focused on her freckles and they're standing out of the picture, your drawing is very emotional and gorgeous.
If I was doing this drawing I'd maybe add more shading like in the forehead, cheeks and chin and I'd add some background because I think it would enclose the whole atmosphere very well. Anyway this is your style it's how you wanted to show your point of view, and because there is less shading it makes us feel more emotional about the picture and I fully respect your way. Good job